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Tromso seaside 3

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seaside view summer ocean mountain spring harmonic idyllic
Image size
3264x2448px 1.91 MB
Make
Motorola
Model
XT910
Shutter Speed
1 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
5 mm
ISO Speed
100
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AnAsianPerson's avatar
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I love the way you captured the water with the mountains behind it. It's a photo that I would imagine to be featured in a calendar underneath December. Although you captured such a beautiful scene from nature, there are a few things that bothered me.

I think it would look better if it was more zoomed in. Less of the water and sky and more of the mountain. That way the mountain would be the main subject. If you do not wish so, then I would suggest getting a better angle so that we could focus on one thing.

I think it's also a little bit too far away, but then again, the zooming thing could fix that.

The fence or whatever it is on the bottom right corner also take out the feeling of the piece. You're trying to go for something beautiful and natural, but the fence over there disturbs that idea.

Over than the other things I've said, this is a beautiful photograph. I hope this helps! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>